User talk:Joeythegforce

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My Two Cents
I'm going to wade in here and say that your edit to Catholicism contained some good ideas but still wasn't quite on the money in terms of grammatical structure and layout. I'll echo what Supervisor 194 has said below and also add in that it would be a good idea for you to look at some goldstar articles and observe how they are written. Click edit on the article and see how things such as linking and bullet points are done, as well as seeing how things are done grammatically (just don't click save!). I learned a lot that way when I first came here, so hopefully it'll help. Your ideas are good though, they're just a bit lost in some grammar uncertainties. Sort these out and you'll be doing very well. Take the advice, keep writing and we look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future!
P.S. Quick note about replying, it's easiest if you put your reply beneath what's said (use Shift+8 to type the star seen above 8 on the keyboard, which on wikis gives a bullet point. I'm confused too, but it works) so that it creates a thread. Also use 4 tildes (~) to sign your posts so it appears like I've made it appear on this page. I know it's a lot to take in but you'll pick it up over time. DoubleR 06:37, 11 Nov 2006 (PST)

Dear Mr. G Force,
I appreciate the effort that you put into edits. Your ideas are, in fact, pretty funny. But seriously dude, you are one confused motherfucker when it comes to writing coherent sentences to get your meaning across. For instance, consider this train-wreck you put in the Whitey entry:

• "This is to some degree in every major professional sport, outside of professional wrestling. Where he excels, while he can't play a sport he can certainly pretend to."

Now then. I had to read that about five times before I understood what you meant. Once I understood it, I rewrote it, so that it made sense:

• "This is the case with all major professional sports aside from professional wrestling - where whitey excels. He may not be able to play a sport, you see, but he can certainly pretend to."

You need to run further edits through Microsoft Word and NOT edit until you see little or no green/red markups. In Word, green markups are intended to show you where you are grammatically incorrect, red markups are intended to show you where your spelling is incorrect. -- Supervisor 194 07:56, 9 Nov 2006 (PST)

• Something odd about being reffered to as Mr. G Force, anyways you are correct and I'm terribly sorry for my incomplete toughts, when I made additions I just did it in a stream of concious with spell check on. I shall be more dillgent in the future. Joeythegforce 02:26, 10 Nov 2006 (PST)

Welcome to EOS. Next time, hit edit up top, that way you can edit all the parts of an article at once, and you don't fill up the Recent Changes page. Also, try and use "Show Preview." Fbi2thegrave 10:51, 20 May 2006 (PDT)

• Thanks for your contributions, which have so far generally not sucked. Seriously, congratulations! However, please link up, categorize and add pictures to your articles, or mark them as stubs. Supervisor 194 11:10, 20 May 2006 (PDT)